Well it was good enough to fool an old fart like me, LOL. I thought the anomalies were intentional. Shhh.. I won't tell anyone.
One thing I will tell you is your composition technique is very good, likely better than mine in my heyday, and back then I used to earn some serious money in this craft. I hope you are making some serious money, too.
Well, if I didn't like it, I wouldn't have posted it. Thank you so much for the compliment on my technique, I appreciate it very much. I make a little money with photography, but I certainly wouldn't call it serious money.
A couple of guys I know from the old days who stuck with photography have called me for referrals, which is very strange because I have been out of the business for so long. One is doing sports photography, which he holds in the same regard as hemorrhoids. But as he said "Ya gotta eat"